3rd oral presentation!

This is my opinion about my part on our third oral presentation;

It was a little bit short, I think, because I was nervous and I didn't say everything I wanted. This happened because I wanted to go faster and then I couldn't go back, so I missed some sentences. I think that my expressions and sentences have improved since the other two oral presentations and now it's easier to express myself more fluently. I used some attractive resources like the power point.We used it which had a lot of pictures for people to pay attention and interest on what we are talking about. I made some movements and gestures and I didn't read from my notes, only I looked at them every so often. I had my ideas organized in a chronological order. Besides, I had been looking at the public all the time while I was talking. I introduced some markers and maybe some new information for someone. Everybody, I think, learnt about the result of having AIDS. Robin helped me a lot with the pronunciation (but when I was talking in front of the class I failed three words). I used fillers like "weaker" and also I used sentence likers. Finally, I noticed the sound of my voice wasn't monotonous and I talked in a fluid continuum.

I only hope you had been enjoying our oral presentation.

2nd ORAL PRESENTATION!

My first oral presentation.

My opinion:
When I finished it I thought that it had been a disaster, I don't know why, but that was my impression.
Later when I watched the video my opinion changed, I thought that it was better than I thought. Also, I listened to some expresions or sentences that when I practised it I failed it, but these day I did it good. So I was happy. Later when I wrote literally all that I said in my oral presentation I saw some important failures and it discouraged me.
I used some attractive resources. I didn't read from my notes and I did some movements to indicated some concret things of the powerpoint , that I was refering at that moment. I organized my ideas in a chronological order . Also I think that all the time I looked at the public while I was talking. I introduced some markers and maybe some information new for someone. For example, I think that everybody learned how poor is a Maya town. I looked for information in my album of photos. I checked my grammar and I used the dictionary to look for the meaning of "palla", "canyes"... I used one sentence liker, I know that I would must tell you more of these. I used fillers, I repeated the word: very.
I knew how pronunce all my words and I checked it with a classmate. Finally I saw that my tone of voice wasn't monotone and I talked in a fluid continuum more or less.

In the next oral presentation I can improve my vocabulary and make sentences longer than these and more "complicated". I think that in my class I have a low level and I don't like it.

Sincerely I don't know what mark I'll get because I don't want to do illusions myself and then that I will be disappointed myself.